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So blindly given,
Yet so hard to earn.
Just made it up on the fly
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SnowWhiteAssassinXI Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Writer
Love it! You had good word use for just two lines.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012   Writer
Thanks so much!! That means a lot! (sorry for the late reply)
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RiFlight Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't really add to what others have said. It's simple, but says so much. I like it.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012   Writer
Thanks! (Sorry for the late reply)
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WilliamRobertJoseph Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Depth through Simplicity.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012   Writer
Thanks! (Sorry for the late reply)
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WilliamRobertJoseph Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. And don't worry about it, it's fine.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012   Writer
:D
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angelichope Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
Love it; it's true and beautiful!:heart:
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Writer
Thanks so much!
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PoeticDeathEyes Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ignorance in bliss
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Writer
yes, it sadly can be so
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amen.
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PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Very short yet perfectly true.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011   Writer
Why thank you... thank you very much!
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PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
Most obliged.
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Faithsfairy3 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student Writer
so damn true! that was what I was thinking about yesterday night! :O
simple but great! :)
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011   Writer
Thanks so much! That really, really means a lot to me that you say that!
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Faithsfairy3 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student Writer
you're so very welcome! and thank you :) THAT really means a lot to me!!
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011   Writer
glad I could be there for you!
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Faithsfairy3 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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TazTitan85 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very, very true. The simplicity of this poem has so much power and depth, great job!
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011   Writer
Thanks so much!!! That really means a lot!
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shadytales Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Student Writer
yeah i agree really good use of just two lines with the words you have selected.
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011   Writer
Thanks a lot! That means a lot to me! :iconsnuggleplz:
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Ctenophore Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
wonderful! There's a lot in these words, you've really done well with the very few you have by looking at it from both sides of the coin. Very, very nice!
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011   Writer
Thanks! That means a lot! I was actually trying to write more of a poem, but after I wrote the first three lines I figured that they stood well enough on their own, so I turned it into a three (okay two) line poem!
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Ctenophore Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
well I think it was a good decision on your part to leave well enough alone :) You're very welcome!
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011   Writer
Thanks! I think so too (not to be big headed or anything hahaha)
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Ctenophore Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
lol you silly girl
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011   Writer
haha... that's me!
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