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The waves lap against the shore,
A steady beat of a marching drum.
His fingers tap the beat on my arm,
Moving the rhythm of the music.

Tonight, we lean against each other,
Lost in the moon and the sounds of the sea.
A gentle sweet melody,
Drifting us away to a place of sweet harmony.

I can feel the tide tickling my toes,
Happy in this moment
But unsure of what he's thinking.
Does he feel the way my heart is beating?

Can he hear the thoughts that are deep inside my head?
I wish there was a way to tell him how I feel,
A secret connection,
Hidden between him and I.

Soon the tide will cover the shore,
Cleaning the sand and washing the beach.
It will wipe away every trace of us,
Every proof that we were even there.

Long after the moon sets,
After the waves have swallowed everything we left behind,
I will remember this magical night,
Just you and me, under the stars,

Together.
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Filmographer
beautiful,what do you listen,i feel like it's inspired by PINK FLOYD?is it :D?
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011   Writer
No, it's not, actually... It was kind of this challenge thing between me and my ex-boyfriend. I've never actually listened to a Pink Floyd song
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student Filmographer
well i congratulate,it doesn't matter,it's amazing
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011   Writer
Thanks a lot! It means a lot to me that people can appreciate my writing :heart:
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Filmographer
you're a great writer,keep on being honest,let it out all with ink
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011   Writer
Thanks! I'll keep working on that... Writing is a good release
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Lonely-Insomniac Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I do wish I could connect with girls that I like haha.
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LoganSloan Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Student General Artist
b e a u t i f u l <3
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011   Writer
Thank you!
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